{"id":3235,"date":"2015-10-29T13:21:12","date_gmt":"2015-10-29T17:21:12","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/?p=3235"},"modified":"2018-01-16T18:45:14","modified_gmt":"2018-01-16T23:45:14","slug":"anxiety-pancakes-writing-a-novel-is-like-building-a-house-or-something","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/anxiety-pancakes-writing-a-novel-is-like-building-a-house-or-something\/","title":{"rendered":"Anxiety Pancakes: Writing a Novel is like Building a House (Or Something)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-3239\" src=\"https:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/1024px-Wood-framed_house-430x217.jpg\" alt=\"1024px-Wood-framed_house\" width=\"430\" height=\"217\" srcset=\"https:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/1024px-Wood-framed_house-430x217.jpg 430w, https:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/1024px-Wood-framed_house.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 430px) 100vw, 430px\" \/><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/commons.wikimedia.org\/wiki\/File:Wood-framed_house.jpg#\/media\/File:Wood-framed_house.jpg\">&#8220;Wood-framed house&#8221; by Jaksmata &#8211; Own work. Licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0 via Commons\u00a0<\/a><\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s back to the drawing board for me. My knowledgeable readers have spoken and said that the story in my novel doesn&#8217;t start moving early enough. I accept their views because I did what I said was necessary in my last post: I listened to them and I reread a good chunk of my manuscript myself.<\/p>\n<p>Some writers have to complete each page perfectly before they move on to the next. But for me, writing a novel is like building a house. I do it in stages. First, the note making and research, and filling a large page with the names of some of the characters and a list of some of the scenes. Then I do the first draft on a tape recorder so I have something to work with&#8211;a blurt, as I call it. You get the gist. Down goes the floor but oops maybe I&#8217;ve forgotten to dig the foundations. And how about that missing roof?<\/p>\n<p>A crucial stage is finding the voice. It took me almost a year to find the right voice for The Dead Celebrities Club. Now it seems I have been confusing the theme of my novel with the story and I need to go back, and streamline my prose so the story isn&#8217;t lost in my descriptions. That means throwing out some chapters and extraneous pages, something I find hard to do because I am the loyal type. If I&#8217;ve worked on passages until they glisten it breaks my heart to say good-bye although saying good-bye is what I must do.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ll put my discarded sections in a file so I can bring them out if I need them. That way these passages aren&#8217;t banished forever.<\/p>\n<p>So I&#8217;m picking up my hammer and saw and possibly a wrecking ball. It&#8217;s time to get down to work.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&#8220;Wood-framed house&#8221; by Jaksmata &#8211; Own work. Licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0 via Commons\u00a0 It&#8217;s back to the drawing board for me. 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