{"id":3212,"date":"2015-10-22T08:17:29","date_gmt":"2015-10-22T12:17:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/?p=3212"},"modified":"2018-01-16T18:22:27","modified_gmt":"2018-01-16T23:22:27","slug":"anxiety-pancakes-when-is-a-novel-finished","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/susanswanonline.com\/wpress\/anxiety-pancakes-when-is-a-novel-finished\/","title":{"rendered":"Anxiety Pancakes: When Is A Novel Finished?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the spring, I said I was finishing my novel, The Dead Celebrities Club, about a white collar fraudster who starts a betting game about old and frail celebrities in a US prison. My dreams told me I was on the home stretch. Well, it turns out there are home stretches and then some.<\/p>\n<p>The first job with a novel is getting the voice of your character right and finding your story. After that, it&#8217;s anybody&#8217;s guess how many times you will revise your draft. Leonardo da Vinci said art is never finished, only abandoned and Paul Valery said the same thing about a poem. Writers have been talking about the need to abandon and not finish novels for a long time now.<\/p>\n<p>But when is a novel finished? That is, what makes the writer decide it&#8217;s time to show it? When I began novel writing, I handed over my draft to an agent long before my book was done. I wanted my agent to find an editor who would help me finish it.<\/p>\n<p>Today I hold onto my work much longer. Most editors are too busy to nurse along a work of fiction so sometimes the agent steps in and helps the writer finish their book before it is shown to publishers.<\/p>\n<p>So when is a novel finished? Here&#8217;s a clue: When you show it to a few knowledgeable readers and they don&#8217;t say your book needs a lot more work. Key phrase\u2013\u2013a lot more. Critical readers will always find something wrong; that&#8217;s their job. But if their comments resonate with you and the problems they spot are easily fixable, your novel may be close to being finished.<\/p>\n<p>The other answer is your own reaction. Leave your novel for a month or so. Then go back and read it through. If you find it (mostly) surprises and pleases you, maybe it&#8217;s time to show it. Or you can always hug your manuscript close like Alistair MacLeod until somebody pries it away from you.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the spring, I said I was finishing my novel, The Dead Celebrities Club, about a white collar fraudster who starts a betting game about old and frail celebrities in a US prison. My dreams told me I was on the home stretch. Well, it turns out there are home stretches and then some. 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